At last, the TARDIS arrives in a spaceship! This feels like home  territory, and it's strange to think that this is the first time it  happens. Once again Raymond Cusick does a fine job on the sets, with the  ship feeling cramped and utilitarian. Of course it's filmed in black  and white, but I get the impression that the ship would have mostly been  gunship grey in-story anyway. There's an old-school feel to the design,  even for the 1960s, like something out of an E.E. 'Doc' Smith Lensmen  novel; it's probably packed to bursting with valves and busbars  (whatever they are). The large, blinking lights on Maitland's control  console just accentuate this.
I like the costumes, too; Daphne Dare has created a uniform that matches  the feel well, a kind of 'spaced-up' commercial pilot's outfit. The  rocket logo on the pocket is the cherry on the top, and the whole thing  feels very Forbidden Planet - or perhaps Captain 'Space' Kingley,  a more British take, from a juvenile book series I enjoyed as a  youngster and still have on my shelves.
Except the similarity isn't complete, because of one thing: Carol.  Writer Peter R. Newman has included a female character who is in a  traditionally male role, and it's just accepted as no big deal. This is  unheard of in the stories I'm thinking about. The closest is Peabody  from the Dan Dare comics, but she's not written as one of the gang.  Okay, so Carol is still referred to as a 'girl', but she's still a big  step up (in terms of social position) from the girls of Marinus and  Skaro.
Dare (Daphne, that is, not Dan) also does a good job with the Sensorite  seen at the end looking through the viewport - now that's a spooky  cliffhanger!
Not all is rosy in this grey world, however. Running over the events in  my mind after viewing I could see that it was (mostly) written to have a  taut, claustrophobic atmosphere; but it's not played or directed like  that. Mervyn Pinfield, the Associate Producer, was chosen to direct  because the scope of the story combined with a limited budget required  someone with experience; but I think he misjudged this. There's nothing  particularly wrong with the technical aspects (camera angles, cutting,  and so forth), but the tone is too light and bland. 
Take the scene where the regulars discover than Maitland and Carol are  dead, cause unknown. They seem mildly upset, a bit sad. They should be  tense, nervous, in case whatever killed the crew gets them too. Then,  when things are seen to be better than they thought, the joking about  the Doctor's interfering curiosity should have been a release of tension  rather than light banter.
This carries on. Barbara and Susan are terrified of an obviously sick  man, and don't say anything, in a bizarre sequence that echoes zombie  movies without any of the horror or tension. When John asks for help and  they still don't respond, Jacqueline Hill looks mildly embarrassed. The  lack of dialogue is certainly the script's fault, but it could have  been directed far better. There's a lot of standing around, blandly  chatting. If this were modern Who Murray Gold's music could have  covered up some of the faults by reintroducing some tension; but it  isn't, and the result is a disappointing realisation of what could have  been a good story. Seeing how it could have been so much better  frustrates me, and I hope that things improve next time.
I have never seen serial G before, and know it doesn't have a great  reputation; I don't think I let that colour my judgement for this  episode. I sometimes diverge radically from popular opinion - I rate The Keys of Marinus and The Edge of Destruction  much higher than most people, for instance - so there's still a chance  I'll love this serial overall; but it has a lot of work to do.
Broadcast:
Date: Saturday, 20th June 1964
Viewers: 7.9 million
Chart Position: 17
Appreciation Index: 59
Rating:
3.5/10.
Next Time:
The Unwilling Warriors.
 
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